All Comments on 'The Journey'

by mom4gurlz

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BenLongBenLongalmost 11 years ago
Memory Lane

OH thank you so much, reliving those first moments when we were young. Remembering the mystique of what lay behind a girls panties, good girls didn't and bad girls did - or was it the other way around? that first glimpse of a naked breast, that first touch or a hard nipple, the fire extending from fingers to breast and back in equal portions. That first fumbled coupling - oh so frustratingly fast for me, and unsatisfying for her, yet moments later repeated again with better results - and then again, and again.

How could I have forgotten the wonders of a drive-in? Blankets taken along for "warmth" - and later discovering so deliciously that she'd left her panties at home so they wouldn't get in the way. Driving home with her hand wrapped around me, just holding - or my hand between her legs, fingers diddling or buried in her warmth. Such fun of youth, all remembered in this wonderful story.

Thanks for the trip to my own memory lane.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Touching story...

... that I can relate to. I was born the opposite side of 1950, but the story showed the male side of my era and touched on why guys did what they did with me. Not that I have not figured those things out over the past 45 or so years, but Maggie expressed the fears and desires I went through in high shcool and college. Just a great story line and very well written (from a retired English teacher). BarbT

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