All Comments on 'The Journey Ch. 08'

One small suggestion... when you extend words for emphasis, i.e. "pleasseeeeeeeee", keep in mind the last 'e' is silent. May I suggest "pleeeeeeeeeasse."

the stories were great...why nit pick the author for some freakin grammatical bs! it's about the content, the emotion, painting a picture with words...

i hope there is more to come

Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Is a good story. I started reading with some reservations but as the chapters progressed I became intrigued. I wonder, though, how he knew all about her. Has her family trained her from birth to be his slave? She seems to subconsciously be programed for him. Judy

Master.......It was the last thing he heard before the fruit knife sliced through his throat !