All Comments on 'The Journey Home Ch. 05'

Some parts were hard to follow, like with the plane taking off, no way that would really happen. Flow wasn't as tight as the previous chapters

Great chapter and I love how you've paired off Max with Betty and Emma with the doctor. Hey! everyone's gotta have some fun now and then, right?

Wow Love it! This is such a great story! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks

the plane took off just like that? was it empty or with passengers? i know she was a flight attendant, but Max couldn't have entered the plane without being checked by security, and have a boarding pass, etc. it would have been more believable if they had sex in one of the airport restrooms.