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All Comments on 'The Keeper and The Dragons Ch. 18-19'

by CharlyYoung

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James_DuncanJames_Duncan5 months ago

These really short ones are grating.. you just start getting into it and then it stops..

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

On the other hand, you don't have to wait months for the next chapter to appear.

Robbb_FangRobbb_Fang5 months ago

I am confused by what happenend with Wraith. The whole sequence felt very rushed.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Some pretty bad grammar mistakes, and very rushed writing chapter, hope it's fixed in the future

LeakyFaucitLeakyFaucit5 months ago

Loved the previous series, getting lost in the atmosphere, one of the best written

I hate to be mean, but this feels like i wrote it.

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Hi, I’m Peter K. Young, plain-spoken and mostly self-educated. I wrote “The Keeper” under my father’s name (Charly Young), mainly because it tickled me to think that he would have enjoyed seeing his name on the cover of a book. In my life, I’ve been a hard rock miner, a boile...