All Comments on 'The Keeper Ch. 03'

It’s OK four-star keep running

ok didn't expect a second POV but great read

can't wait for more.

Awesome story so far enjoying the variety or races makes it very interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Really good story so far hope you write more!

fea doing drugs ?

You looking for fea trouble ?

ch3 has no link to ch 4

Oops, now the dark Elves are involved? That sounds ominous...

I love your set- up and the world building.

really good

I am loving this.

I'm impressed at how quickly this has become an immersive universe overlaid on top of our own reality.

Thanks, CharlyYoung, for writing and sharing.

I enjoy this so far, but the fact that only Mina amongst the magical community, (so far) isn't a complete asshole to the protagonist is definitely starting to wear thin.

Chapters are to short, you just get involved and it ends.

Such an unbelievable story….a 7-11 with a public restroom?!?

But yea you got me hooked now so I guess I’ll read all of the chapters tonight

This has all the markings of a RIPPING yarn!!!! Really good so far

Excellent chapter! Thanks.

I know that this is just scene setting still, but with fragments of history and plot, but it still hooks me in and makes me want to read more. Excellent writing!