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Ramjet57over 2 years agoGood story, needs a finish, with Lachlan as keeper, ruling with grace and reasonable outcomes. Stopping the child sales and possibly freeing some of them.
ZZchromosomeover 2 years ago"Surprisingly, given his street-smart cynicism, he never thought to ask what price he was going to have to pay for all this education." Ending the chapter with the real question. What is the price?
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CharlyYoung@CharlyYoungHi, I’m Peter K. Young, plain-spoken and mostly self-educated. I wrote “The Keeper” under my father’s name (Charly Young), mainly because it tickled me to think that he would have enjoyed seeing his name on the cover of a book. In my life, I’ve been a hard rock miner, a boile...
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