All Comments on 'The Keeper Ch. 17-19'

by CharlyYoung

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loving this tale!!!

Wh00sherWh00sherover 2 years ago

Fantastic story. Just wish the chapters were longer and more frequent!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excellent lead in so far. Short and sharp chapters. Some welcome humour and well written. Not a story for those wanting sex every other page but I think it's great.

goo_neiggoo_neigover 2 years ago

no link between 17-19 and 20-22

Mike9947Mike9947over 2 years ago

I give up

All 5’s

But not literotica

Not even close

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Hi, I’m Peter K. Young, plain-spoken and mostly self-educated. I wrote “The Keeper” under my father’s name (Charly Young), mainly because it tickled me to think that he would have enjoyed seeing his name on the cover of a book. In my life, I’ve been a hard rock miner, a boile...

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