All Comments on 'The Keeper Ch. 20-22'

You suck me into this world with every chapter!

Looking forward to the next chapter as I am hooked!!!

Great work!

Excellent work. Great writing on a site that doesn't have a lot of that!

That was a really good chapter. Things are heating up and the body count is rising quickly.

You repeat yourself too much! I’ve read 3 times about the gunfight scene and about the maid killed by the blood witch! Would be good if it was edited to remove repitition!

Read most of the chapter's posted here, and bought the Kindle book. So far the story is a great read. It's marred by some grammar and wording issues. As you read some parts, it seems that some words are missing. Besides that, as a Retired Navy Veteran, the dialog between the Ambulance crew and Quinn had me chuckling. I was able to easily picture in my mind what the scene would be like, and the actions of both people.

It’s amazing how the anonymous love to chastise. Like I said, well written and entertaining, I’m thoroughly enjoying your work.