All Comments on 'The Keeper Ch. 23-25'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

waw

am really enjoying the story

well done charly young

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A truly excellent story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love your writing, but I would like to suggest a slight change. Please consider altering the no one will tell Quinn what is going on trope to something else. Usually in a politically fraught or complex situation people will either tell the wrong story or try to manipulate the person to their side. Otherwise, outstanding :--)

SoharaSoharaover 2 years ago

Definitely a touch of magic, to the writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Your skill and attention to detail are very much appreciated. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

2nd time repeating this one about the judge and the results of the fae problems! Whats the deal?

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Hi, I’m Peter K. Young, plain-spoken and mostly self-educated. I wrote “The Keeper” under my father’s name (Charly Young), mainly because it tickled me to think that he would have enjoyed seeing his name on the cover of a book. In my life, I’ve been a hard rock miner, a boile...

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