All Comments on 'The Keeper Ch. 28-31'

Great story just wish the chapters were longer, looking forward to lots more.

I've read this chapter twice. It deserved a second reading.

Superb.

Going from excellent to outstanding. Thanks again.

Awesome, awesome, awesome. I'm completely hooked. Great storytelling. Thank you, and please keep them coming.

Loving it! Keep it up :)

This is excellent. Some of the best writing on literotica. Not sure that it belongs here, the story is good enough to be published. It's imaginative in a way that leaves you wanting more. I understand the short chapters as you publish often but I'd prefer longer chapters.

I love this storie, thank you for sharing your talent💕

Sitting on edge for the next chapter... excellent work....

I am beyond disappointed I’ve reached the end of this after just discovering your story today. I look forward to more.

This story is already published. I purchased it from Amazon Books last week. Don’t have to wait for the chapters and I don’t mind supporting the author for his great work.

That was a satisfying chapter. Thank you.

I confess the paragraph where he lets fly at the Witches made me shiver, that is powerful writing, made far more effective by the fact he has held back his anger and frustration with them throughout the whole of the story. I am properly impressed. 5⭐️ no question. Thank you, I appreciate the effort and skill that’s gone into this story. Ppfzz.