by CharlyYoung
it is very well crafted and I don't give a damn if you published it somewhere else. Much appreciated.
Lachlan is a tiny bit overpowered, but got to say: I am fully hooked into this story. Please publish the full length once you're done: very well put together.
I'm loving it, this story just keeps getting better, please please please do not stop writing just as you are
The only problem I have with this story is waiting for the next part. Great work.
Well crafted I have to agree...compelling...and entertaining!!! My only complaint is the chapters are too short!!! Thanks for this story!!!
I don't have a problem waiting . I will enjoy it when you release it . In the meantime there are countless other fantastic reads to entertain me . But this is exceptionally good . Well done .
This is just an incredibly well crafted piece of literature that I always look forward to catching up on. Thank you for giving me something so entrancing to enjoy.
"He picked up the bag that contained the club's receipts, dumped them out, and shoved the gristly head in." It's "grisly", and I respect a man who takes his enemies' heads as trophies.
I just found this series and loving it. Your world building is phenomenal! That said, it does feel overly rushed at times. For example, who is Megan Hart and why does she break down over Julie's injuries? And Julie goes from not knowing her savior to calling him Mr. Quinn without introduction