All Comments on 'The Keeper Ch. 32-34'

by CharlyYoung

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is getting really good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

it is very well crafted and I don't give a damn if you published it somewhere else. Much appreciated.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lachlan is a tiny bit overpowered, but got to say: I am fully hooked into this story. Please publish the full length once you're done: very well put together.

SensitiveHandsSensitiveHandsover 2 years ago

OMG! Loving this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm loving it, this story just keeps getting better, please please please do not stop writing just as you are

hudsinihudsiniover 2 years ago

The only problem I have with this story is waiting for the next part. Great work.

arrowglassarrowglassover 2 years ago
I am totally hooked...and need another fix!!!

Well crafted I have to agree...compelling...and entertaining!!! My only complaint is the chapters are too short!!! Thanks for this story!!!

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 2 years ago

I don't have a problem waiting . I will enjoy it when you release it . In the meantime there are countless other fantastic reads to entertain me . But this is exceptionally good . Well done .

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is just an incredibly well crafted piece of literature that I always look forward to catching up on. Thank you for giving me something so entrancing to enjoy.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 2 years ago

"He picked up the bag that contained the club's receipts, dumped them out, and shoved the gristly head in." It's "grisly", and I respect a man who takes his enemies' heads as trophies.

4275727065657342757270656573over 1 year ago

I personally like the overpowered part. It was a fun read.

BigotedeFocaBigotedeFoca5 months ago

This is so good I can’t put it down, ecstasy.

xXxphotographerxXxxXxphotographerxXx5 months ago

I just found this series and loving it. Your world building is phenomenal! That said, it does feel overly rushed at times. For example, who is Megan Hart and why does she break down over Julie's injuries? And Julie goes from not knowing her savior to calling him Mr. Quinn without introduction

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Hi, I’m Peter K. Young, plain-spoken and mostly self-educated. I wrote “The Keeper” under my father’s name (Charly Young), mainly because it tickled me to think that he would have enjoyed seeing his name on the cover of a book. In my life, I’ve been a hard rock miner, a boile...

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