All Comments on 'The Key'

by Just Plain Bob

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
A good fast reading story

To be so lucky! A fun little story, almost believable, but still good to read. I enjoyed the good ending too. Thanks for the post.

bruce22bruce22over 14 years ago
Nice Light Romp

Unless you are worried by all the cuckholds that were generated! Well written.

woodmanonewoodmanoneover 14 years ago
Well Done

Great character development in such a short story, good work. Thanks for your hard work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good read

with a little humor. I see there is always one dickhead who can't stand this authors stories, reads it anyway or pretends he read it, just so he can give a low score. Seen it happen over and over. Regardless, you can bet this type of thing happens all over the world. There are always married women ready to get laid. Just a fact of life. Good ending, looks like his roaming days are over. ML

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 14 years ago
I don't know Bob....

...I'd watch out for Ruby's hubby. Even though he's wheelchair bound he don't cotton to her takin' her love to town.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You know Bob you are so keen to

unload(thoughts come quick and I say that's technically genius)sometimes you don't realise what a great idea you've had til it's trashed. This was a nothing story with a nugget of gold. Should've taken your time on it.

xtremeddxtremeddover 14 years ago
Keyed up over ending

JPB

Always keyed up for your endings. Good read as always thanks enjoyed it

xtreme

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
zero by Anonymous (not me!)

The guy who rated your story at Zero (00) is obviously 'Nancy's' husband!

WickedwanWickedwanabout 14 years ago
not bad

just a nice quick read. a little light on the emotional side or details. but i's perfect for what it is, a simple one-page story.

MystykOneMystykOneover 12 years ago
hey jpb

i gotta tellya i do love the humour and pathos that fill your stories to overfilling. your characters are well defined and in the large understandable. BUT i am sooooo not a fan of the wimp husband stories but i also gotta say its worth gettin the sick feelin in ma tummy that that sort of story gives me just to luck into the pearls that i do like.

i understand the stories that i dont like....its just that my personal moral code aint that bendy. once a cheater always one.....and a liar never stops lyin. male or female. thats one of the things i also enjoy about your stories. men cheat to. and actually more opften and your stories cover both sides. good job

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 11 years ago
Bob, a good one...

I have had one or two (well, two) who tried to fuck me to death. The last one I am still friends with although no more sex. Too bad but a really good friend is hard to find these days.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
so,

how many people got off on this???

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

pathetic

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Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...