by Voboy
Original, hot, and filthy! I kind of expected them to be rolling in guano by the end of the show. If only science was like this all the time….
WOW. You can cover the watefront from the Thames estuary 900 years ago to the rocks off Maine today, each one as raw and brutally-pashionat as sudden sexual reality can be. Fantastic realism, birdshit and all, as only the matural splendor of the sea can bring. Everyone of us , 99% landlocked bastards, need the reality of the vast ocean your vision can bring.
One of the things that I like most when reading is when a story takes me away to a place and time that I would never have thought about otherwise. Now I’m off to look up Puffins and the islands of Maine. This setting is so vivid and realistic that I feel like I’m there!
Aside from that I really appreciate your style of writing. Your dialogue and description are well-balanced and read so naturally. The writing is so entertaining with similes like:
“…on me like a fucking lion taking a gazelle…” or
“…a look on his face like he’d just gotten a free upgrade and had no idea why.”
This is great stuff!
Of course the sex is smoking hot and your description is great there, too. 5*
Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.
It truly does seem like a worthwhile charity, with dedicated people doing boring but important work in nauseating conditions. My hat's off to them, and I hope they get laid occasionally.
Absolutely amazing writing, puts my stuff to shame. Love the needy but confident female characters you write.