All Comments on 'The Kilo of Sin Similla'

As I knew it would be. Thank you, my friend. "The proof of a theory is in its reasoning, not in its sponsorship." Thanks, Randi.

"You've been arrogant and condescending the last year" - I'm not a fan of stories that spring new facts on us. Nothing was said about her attitude before. The only problem until the cheating came to light was when she criticized Monty for dissing Frank.

Still a great story, don't get me wrong!

Good to see some justice rendered to an asshole and a slut. Well written...thanks for the story.

And very well written by the way, even as you admitted it was slightly based on an EAP poem.

Donna was described as an intelligend woman and should have known the outcome of her betrayal. Eventually they got caught and the harsh revenge took place.

Well done. Thank you.

Frank

For a Poe remembrance. Stranger than his stories was Poe’s death

Although Chekov demanded you change the names to foreshadow Poe's method, and protect Early, this is the perfect sequel to How High a Price. Thanks for another great story.

And it did provide a good background as to the why.

I've always loved Poe. I started reading his stories before I was even a teenager and they horrified me - and I loved it.

Well done. Thanks for posting. 5 stars.

Acapulco Gold might have been a good vintage as well. Creating a back story is laudable but the slights of Montressor seemed to hinge on his advantaged birth which may have made Fortunado a cuck. The plot was believable. You started to get into the mindset and it would have been nice had you gone further. I liked it a lot. Thanks.

Well written. Not particularly unique, but certainly well told and well structured.

You are amazingly well read!

Undoubtedly this adds greatly to your fascinating and diverse stories. Of all those I've thus far read only two did not ring my chimes but even They were designed and executed!!!!

Thank you for your efforts and keep them coming!

I've every work Poe published and picked up on your device tight away; very well done!!

She came rap tap-tapping at my ... door? Did she have raven hair?

All you needed at the end, beyond all else, was a ... tell-tale heart!

Love the Poe homage!