All Comments on 'The Kinky Car Ride'

just love car rides like that

The start of a hot story. Pretty good for your first post too.

Sitting on lap on car ride stories are my favorite. Everyone knows what’s going to happen but it’s a fun read anyhow.

Some technical issues are keeping this from scoring higher. The son’s name changes midway and the tenses changes from past to present and back again.

Fun read nonetheless.

This a pairs to be a first time effort, and it shows! But don't get to down about the negative feedback from people who leave Anonymous comments! Constructive criticism time. Maybe proof read before submitting! Ryan/Chet! Keep writing while the rest of us keep procrastinating. Guilty✋. (Side note) to all other writers the fact this has sixty plus thousand reads should tell you(writers) that we (the readers) like this genre! So if you can do better, go ahead I'd love to read more on this particular subject. (Side Side note) this's the first comment I've ever written and I chose to do it on an android device which seems way dumber than my iPhone! (Autocorrect) anyway! I'm babbling and no one's still reading this anyway so I might as well tell the person still reading this when the worlds going to end! (That just took a dark turn lol) anyway it's (the world) is going to end on the...

Nice start

Nice start. May I suggest you read other stories here on Lit. Try letting your stories run a bit. Not very many readers like a short "essay" style story. Whatever you do, don't give up. You show a lot of potential.

Hope to see more of your stories.

Good one, Continue

www.xnxx.com/video-8xxw7e1/a_ride_to_remember

Too short. A real good start though.

Who the fuck is Chet