All Comments on 'The Knowing Ch. 08'

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Desire6194Desire6194over 7 years ago
Kudos to you

I'm so in love with this story. Jaan and Santiago love is so endearing. Jaan can finally get sound sleep now that he's where he belongs. I'll be desperately awaiting the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

She is going to stress herself out with worry. Santos just need to talk to him before he leaves. It would be a start to clearing up some of her confusion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I can't

I can't with you and these teaser updates. Happy you updated but so sad, it was so short. You're an amazing writer!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
WHERES THE REST

Where's The ReST?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Update

Amazing story. Please update!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
STILL WAITING

WOW WHAT A STORY.ENJOYED THIS STORY VERY MUCH.CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.PLEASE DONT TAKE LONG.

girlthat392girlthat392over 6 years ago
Very good chapter

The knowing is such a good read it had me crying and laughing. I totally look forward to reading the next chapter or anything else you write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great job!!

This is one of my favorite stories I've read in a long time!! Kudos to you for writing a story with characters with depth, insecurities, and real emotions!! Can't wait for the next installment!!F

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please! Get an editor!

She starred at him? How about she stared at him? Doesn't that make more sense? I stare at you. You star in a play. See the difference? Yesterday I stared at you while you starred in a play.

It is really hurting the impact of the story. I am not the language police, these errors are not the nitpicky type. They are basic and need to be corrected.

And, finish the damn story! You must be able to figure out a happy ending!

sike94sike94almost 6 years ago
Gosh

So. Much. Angst.

I hate angsty stories, but a well written story is a well written story. I doubt this will ever be finished, but I enjoyed it while it lasted :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
FINISH THIS, I'VE READ THIS 2X

Please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
This is so good

I wish you had finished this.

4certain4certainalmost 2 years ago

Great story, but my imagined conclusion may not be as good as what you could produce. Santos and Jaan belong together. Biko and Jaan need to be in each other's lives too. Two more chapters are needed to complete this romance.

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