All Comments on 'The 'L' Game Ch. 03'

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BrettJBrettJover 14 years ago
Improvement

This was a much better story - the heat is rising, but I felt it ended too abruptly. I will keep my eyes on it and continue to comment, PM me if you have any questions.

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