All Comments on 'The Lab Rat'

by Xyta_Midnyte

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
deliciously twisted

This is edging taken to the next level. beautiful audio. critique was something seemed a little of on the dialogue in the build up of the story. Could not put a finger on it. Over all loved this piece though.

Xyta_MidnyteXyta_Midnyteover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you, Anonymous

Thank you for taking the time to leave constructive feedback. I'm not quite sure what it is, either, but I know where you're coming from. I'll have to keep it in mind when I write the script for my next piece, because, what I want, more than anything, is an authentic feel to these audios. I don't want anything to disrupt the immersive experience I hope I'm providing. x

ukitakkeukitakkeover 6 years ago
Loved it

Loved this. Please, Please do a sequel to this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Best performance

Easily the best performance I’ve ever heard on literotica. The blend of fear, argent, arousal was amazing. That edge you achieved without cumming was quite believable and had me on an edge of my own. Amazing

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great erotic horror

This is an extraordinary bit of story telling. The plot, if put in writing, would be considered hackneyed at bit. However, with Xyta's wonderful voice characterization, it becomes an exciting tale of erotic horror. The last few minutes, in particular, let us hear and identify with a woman facing a truly horrific fate. By not going overboard with histrionics, Xyta shows the desperation and the resignation of our heroine. I think it's her best performance yet.

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