All Comments on 'The Lad in the Lingerie Shop Ch. 02'

I have been so looking forward to this serial, as a totally lost lingerie fetishist who read the same material as our hero I am looking forward to more! In the UK Exchange and Mart used to be good for those ink drawing lingerie adverts.

Should be a fun read. I just wished the story would be a bit longer per chapter is all.

Such wonderful detail what threads and needles to use could have been sat in the room watching our heroine being interviewed . Next chapter and next one know will be a true delight

Excellent story. It's an amusing plot, and I like the way that it's building gradually, giving you time to develop the characters. I must be about ten years younger than your antihero, but also went through a spell of unemployment in my early twenties (in my case in the Midlands, and only six weeks or so long). By the early 1980s there were so many on the dole that they'd given up checking whether you were actually looking for work. Too bad, if it would have unfolded anything like this.

Good start! Please continue

Couldn't you have put two or three chapters together?

These one page stories spoil the flow.

MORE AND MORE SEXCITING..!!!

I’ve always had a desire to work in a lingerie shop. I like where this is heading, looking forward to reading the next chapters.

I really love how this story is unfolding. It has a very realistic perspective as most deceptive schemes fall apart. 💋

Veronica