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All Comments on 'The Lad in the Lingerie Shop Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Longer chapters please

Good story so far but chapters need to be longer and start progressing with any activities that you encountered when working there. 3 chapters of backstory is a bit long but still worth reading to see what happens. Only gave 3 stars as needs story to progress now, otherwise people will lose interest

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

yes it is time to get to the meat of the story enough of the build up now lets have the good stuff

BoytitsBoytitsover 3 years ago

Interesting but need to get to the action a 3 from me so far.

Veronica_E_DayVeronica_E_Dayalmost 2 years ago

Excellent storyline, I am enjoying the way the story & characters are developing. 💋

Veronica

CountessDenicaCountessDenica8 months ago

Call that a "story"???

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English, mature. Secret TV admirer. My stories will share a common theme, that of men being dominated by women who force them to cross-dress against their will. They will probably include spanking and enforced chastity.