by madetoobey
Loving the story and I fully understand the time it takes to write each chapter, torn between telling the story and the quality of it.
so do carry on but would love longer chapters as well the old catch 22..
I am enjoying the story and can't wait for the next chapter, especially given the cliffhanger with Anita.
One minor criticism is with regard the the mail order purchases. You have implied there have been multiple purchases by Robert, but other than the first panty purchase you have not provided any details on what Robert has been buying or whether he has been wearing his purchases. You may be positioning the story for a big reveal later in which case I may have to retract my criticism, but at the moment that feels like a bit of a missed opportunity to intensify the story.
A lovely little twist in the ongoing story - more please , it is so titillating to read
Big fan of the series so far and I'm looking forward to more. I do hope, however, that Anita doesn't end up as a cruel sadist, and instead is a more caring figure in Robert's sissification. I suppose all the humiliation would be Yvonne's role lol
Really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next instalment. Don’t rush. Keep the quality up.
Great story line, looking forward to seeing how this mystery unravels!
Quite interesting, I am liking how the plot has thickened. Wonderful build up. 💋
Veronica