All Comments on 'The Lad in the Lingerie Shop Ch. 04'

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northirishdivernorthirishdiverover 3 years ago
Moving on steadley

Loving the story and I fully understand the time it takes to write each chapter, torn between telling the story and the quality of it.

so do carry on but would love longer chapters as well the old catch 22..

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More please

I am enjoying the story and can't wait for the next chapter, especially given the cliffhanger with Anita.

One minor criticism is with regard the the mail order purchases. You have implied there have been multiple purchases by Robert, but other than the first panty purchase you have not provided any details on what Robert has been buying or whether he has been wearing his purchases. You may be positioning the story for a big reveal later in which case I may have to retract my criticism, but at the moment that feels like a bit of a missed opportunity to intensify the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Twist

A lovely little twist in the ongoing story - more please , it is so titillating to read

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

now it could be getting hot for him

gravitrongravitronover 3 years ago

Big fan of the series so far and I'm looking forward to more. I do hope, however, that Anita doesn't end up as a cruel sadist, and instead is a more caring figure in Robert's sissification. I suppose all the humiliation would be Yvonne's role lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story. Keep it up. (So to speak)

Really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next instalment. Don’t rush. Keep the quality up.

aethelflaedaethelflaedover 3 years ago
Loving it.

Great work so far, I’m loving the slow build-up too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
more

more, more, tell us more

rmac1rmac1over 3 years ago
Love this build up

Great story line, looking forward to seeing how this mystery unravels!

Veronica_E_DayVeronica_E_Dayalmost 2 years ago

Quite interesting, I am liking how the plot has thickened. Wonderful build up. 💋

Veronica

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English, mature. Secret TV admirer. My stories will share a common theme, that of men being dominated by women who force them to cross-dress against their will. They will probably include spanking and enforced chastity.