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Click hereEllie stopped by the bed, fully dressed. "The room was rented under an assumed name and we wore disguises. We cleaned all our dna from the room, uhh, except what you swallowed. You'll run into us eventually, but before that this little vid will have made the round of your office and country club." She leaned over him. "By the way, I know how much you liked this since there's a puddle of your cum under your cock right now." She stood again. "I know you have to take a dump real bad. And a piss too. So we'll call for house keeping to let find you. In about four hours." Ellie turned and clasped Travis' hand. "Now I have to go take care of my hubby. I really owe him for this. Maybe I'll join Larissa and we can put on a show for him. Bye-bye."
In truth it was only three hours before housekeeping came in and called security. By then he had messed himself and was hard pressed to convince them not to call the cops. He told them it was a miscommunication between the other participants and he greased their palms liberally, especially the cleaning staff. He ran into his ex-wife eighteen months later, in a grocery store. The only contact they'd had was through lawyers. She was pushing a stroller and walking with Travis. He started to berate her but Travis wordlessly intervened by standing right in front of Brent. He was a bit smaller than Brent but they both knew it wasn't worth a fight.
"Y'know, asshole." Larissa still wanted to get a word in. "If you had asked me, we might have been able to have fun with your tramps. But you had to cheat, break my trust. Then when I found out what you did to Ellie. Well, if you ask me you deserve what you got. And more. Now Ellie and Travis and I are enjoying life with people who love and are honest with each other. And all you have are your hollow skanks. Goodbye."
Brent had learned the hard way that women were capable of anything, you only had to ask. But if you cross them they will likely get their revenge.
- COMMENTS
jimjam69over 3 years agoJeez! I didn't think it was as bad as some of your commenters. Matter of fact I thought it was pretty good. The arrogant jerk got his comeuppance and that is what counts.
Jhbrown27over 4 years agoPretty well written. Not bad story, just pretty much like the rest
Anonymousover 4 years agoYou should stay out of the loving wives category as you simply have no clue as to how to write a story fit for that category. This was just nonsense.
1 star
Anonymousabout 6 years agoBrent got some bothers from the Hood, and they grabbed Travis and cut off his cock before they killed him. Travis cock was sent back to Elli in a pickle jar. They grabbed Ellie and Larissa then sent then to a Mexican whore house. Brent took over care is his kids. So everyone lived happily ever after!
Anonymousover 9 years agoThis story was absolutely disgusting. Besides anyone who writes about rape is a sick fuck to begin with. I also read in your profile that your Bi. You're not Bi, while you say you like females, any man who sucks another man's cock is a raving Faggot that needs to be strung up by the thumbs and have the royal shit kicked out of them. Unlike you, I'm not going to give the satisfaction of knowing who I really am. I will tell you this much, I happen to be a very good, and very close friend of MoogPlayer's and I read the arrogant, no, make that ignorant, bullshit that you wrote on his last and newest story.
I know now why you attempted to put him down. It's because your stories pure shit, and it is not only evident, but strongly reinforced by their terribly low ratings they have received. The reason that you put other writer's stories down is because you're jealous, as well as a lousy excuse for a writer AND a human being, you fucking perverted cocksucker. I tried to give you the benefit of the doubt and attempted to read what you call art. MoogPlayer has red "H"'s on every single one of his stories and you don't, you homosexual piece of shit. That's the ONLY reason you put him down, and if you try to say otherwise, you're a liar.
I stood side-by-side with MoogPlayer under the same combat conditions that we both went through, and I assure you, he knows very well about the things he writes, because most of his stories come from his own experiences, you arrogant son of a bitch. I'm going to say this last thing and then I'll shut up. I hope that you burn in hell for being a faggot. You and people like you make me sick primarily because I lad my life on the line for my country, and while he would never tell anyone this, MoogPlayer did too.
But as far as I'm concerned, I didn't do what I did for all of you homosexual abominations to God. You and all the rest of the queers, fags, dykes and lesbians in this world make me sick that I'm forced to have to breath the same air that you do. Know this, you will ALL burn in hell when the time comes for you to stand before God, you sick fuck. Maybe I will too, but if I do, I'm going cut a deal with the Devil to make certain that I get the opportunity to kick your faggoty ass every day for all eternity.
betrayedbyloveover 10 years agoI do not condone rape so I won't rate this tale. However, it seemed that the serial cheater and all around asshole got what was coming to him. Fuck him and all like him.
Rob Connerover 12 years agoThose mother fu***ers have to sleep sometime! All I could say was the three of them better sleep lightly and spend a lot of time looking over their shoulders. He might have been an asshole but no one deserves what thet did. All the cunt wife had to do was get a divorce and the woman sue for child support.
