by MissKris14
Would love to read more!! Cant wait for the next chapter.
I really like the characters you've built here. Can't wait to see where it goes!
You have one of the most free flowing, easy to read writing styles I have seen on this web site. Also your character development is excellent. Thank you for sharing.
Both so sweet and she's so young and innocent. He has lots of potential steaminess. I'm looking forward to seeing their relationship progress. When is the next chapter coming?
Great job for your second story!! Keep the chapters coming - can't wait as long for the next one.
Great story. It is progressing nicely, not rushing and not to slow. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
This is a really enchanting tale. I love the pace of it and the characters. I like the humour and gentle teasing. I so can't wait to read some more :-)
Tripp is so drool worthy and Kira is a girl after my own heart...lol. Great series
This is a sweet, romantic story. So far, I give five stars for Chapters 1 and 2. A few errors I wish you hadn't made -
astutely aware of my own body
I think you meant acutely
tampered waist?
What’s that? Tapered, maybe?
But still, a sweet story.
I love how you're building a romantic entaglement. I certainly don't see the grammatical errors that some others have commented. I think you're an outstanding writer with an exceptional story.