All Comments on 'The Lady and the Cowboy Ch. 02'

by MissKris14

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sexykitty4playsexykitty4playover 13 years ago
Great so far...

Would love to read more!! Cant wait for the next chapter.

svenjollysvenjollyover 13 years ago
Fantastic build up

I really like the characters you've built here. Can't wait to see where it goes!

UtleyUtleyover 13 years ago
Writing Style

You have one of the most free flowing, easy to read writing styles I have seen on this web site. Also your character development is excellent. Thank you for sharing.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 13 years ago
They're cute.

Both so sweet and she's so young and innocent. He has lots of potential steaminess. I'm looking forward to seeing their relationship progress. When is the next chapter coming?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More please

Great job for your second story!! Keep the chapters coming - can't wait as long for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
*****

Great pace,i liked it.Can't wait next chapter.thanks (ppt)

angin_berhembusangin_berhembusover 13 years ago
.......

Its great story, cant wait for the next post.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More...

Great story. It is progressing nicely, not rushing and not to slow. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

JazCullenJazCullenover 13 years ago
Delightful!

This is a really enchanting tale. I love the pace of it and the characters. I like the humour and gentle teasing. I so can't wait to read some more :-)

honeybreehoneybreeover 13 years ago
5 out of 5 across the board!

Tripp is so drool worthy and Kira is a girl after my own heart...lol. Great series

Gary13Gary13about 10 years ago
Sweet

This is a sweet, romantic story. So far, I give five stars for Chapters 1 and 2. A few errors I wish you hadn't made -

astutely aware of my own body

I think you meant acutely

tampered waist?

What’s that? Tapered, maybe?

But still, a sweet story.

robertlrobertlover 9 years ago
Still great!

I love how you're building a romantic entaglement. I certainly don't see the grammatical errors that some others have commented. I think you're an outstanding writer with an exceptional story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Super cute and very fun! Thanks for sharing :)

DuncanitaDuncanitaover 1 year ago

I really love your writing!

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