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All Comments on 'The Lady In The Castle'

by fluidline1

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
The first page was a struggle to read

Skipped the second page.

The ending was average.

But, I'm giving you the benefit of doubt.

doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
Great story

Very well written (ahem at the fish comment LOL)

Your use of words kept the flow of the story alive. Great job ;-)

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