All Comments on 'The Lady in White'

I couldn't get past the fourth paragraph. The spelling and punctuation completely ruined the story for me. I would suggest getting an editor.

A pretty o.k. story. Good character development, great sex. The spelling and grammar was very distracting and of course the story isn't original.

I made the mistake of asking a friend to edit my story to get it done faster. Clearly a mistake. I'm terribly sorry and can't appologize enough to my readers. I've sent an e-mail to a REAL editor to get this story fixed and resubmitted asap. I promise to never, EVER do that again. I hope to have the edited version up and running within 3 days. Please be patient, and once again, I'm sorry. Thanks so much!