All Comments on 'The Lake House Ch. 02'

Now, is that a great sight for a boy to see first thing in the morning, or what? His own mother's vagina spread wide for his viewing pleasure? This series by an 18 to 22 year old author promises to be the best series ever on LitErotica. The dialogue is terrific. When Garrett springs a hard on and his mom bends down and plants a big kiss on his cock, he moans and his mother Kathy says,"Oh, does my baby boy like that?" I love how she calls him her "baby boy" and calls herself "mommy," like she says, "fuck me, fuck your mommy." She lets her boy's cock up into the same wonderful hole he came out of, he pumps that hole real good, his mom cums, and Garrett unloads his young balls up inside her. It's just beautiful how mother and son fall asleep, the boy's fat cock still buried in his mommy's cunt.

PREGNANCY.............Even after she tests positive, there will be MONTHS

of FUCKING that "lay' ahead.................

Sentences end in one of: a period, a question mark, or an exclamation point and never a comma!. So obviously ," should be ." I hope your mistakes are due to sticky fingers but they occur too often.

This story is getting better, Mom should get knocked up in the next chapter. You could use a proof reader, before the next chapter is posted. Thanks again for the read

The story is getting better. Looking forward to seeing where they go from here.

You need a GOOD editor. Having read a couple of your stories, you show the same shortcoming -- grammer and punctuation. You especially need someone to show you how to properly punctuate, as you make the mistake of trying to combine sentence fragments into full sentences. Your ideas are very good, but your writing skills are lacking. A GOOD editor can help in this area.

I like the story, & would like to see more chapters. Thanks

I see we have the grammar police with us tonight! :)

Please keep the story going it is interesting so far. Looking forward, to see what twist comes later.

Ugh. Please do me a favor and announce this in the blurb when you do. I'd rather read up to the chapter when it's still a mom-son story, and doesn't turn into a wild orgy with the town.

Still, the first two chapters are pretty good. 4.5 and 5 stars respectively.

Good premise. Nice build up. Poor execution. Lost interest.

3 stars.

Actually preferred them drunk before fucking......a better description of sex acts would be dope. This just came off juvy, dammit!!

A great start to as I see a long story

with good foundations

The grammar police are great as they have all these comments

when you check on them, they haven't put up anything for us to enjoy.

I enjoy reading good stories so give 5's to make up for those that are so judgemental and give 2 or 3's.

Stay in there Kp1215, don't worry about the knockers.

when will chapter 3 be available

Garrett awoke with his usual morning wood, but got even harder when he looked over at his naked mom sleeping next to him. He moved over on top of her, his hard cock between them. He began kissing her lips and soon she extended her tongue into his mouth. Almost in unison, Kathy spread her legs as Garrett arched his back to align the head of his cock with his mother's waiting lips. Garrett moaned as he entered her, "Oooooooooh mom!" "Oh god Garrett, give it to me hard!" Kathy responded. Garrett started giving his mom long hard strokes, his cockhead hitting her pussy bottom, as well as her clit with his pelvis simultaneously. Kathy quickly began moaning "Oh," with each thrust. Garrett got so turned on listening to his mom, he began pounding into her faster, and harder. Kathy could no longer hold her tongue, as she expressed her sexual pleasures. "Oh god Garret!" "Oh honey!" "Oh honey!" "Oh god baby!" "Oh yes, yes, yes!" "Oh Garrett, you're going to make me cum!" "Oh honey, oh honey, oh honey!" "Aaaaaaaaaaaah ooooooooh Garrett!" "Oh yes, oh yes, oh yes, oh yes, oh yes, oh yes!"

ch.03 Son Impregnates his Mom with triplets,all girls with more babies to come.