All Comments on 'The Lampwatcher Ch. 04'

Too Slow to get to something interesting !

Take your time, write your story how you want.

What the hell happened to this chapter?? It read like it was written by a lobotomized monkey. The first three chapters were ok I was intrigued by where the story was going but this one the writing was so bad I couldn't even finish reading it. I would like to see where this story is going but you need to proof read or get an editor before posting.