All Comments on 'The Landlord'

Very poorly written. I don't apologize for saying that. I didn't write it so why should I be sorry for what I think of the story.

The concept is hugely erotic...luxurious furs spread everywhere, but he loses his virginity and keeps coming and coming? It just doesn't have any ring of truth to it. Strangers walk in without any notice and go down on each other? Also not realistic. Also, the writing at the beginning is choppy and difficult to read. You might want to find an editor to help you clarify and tighten up your story.