All Comments on 'The Last 24 Hours Ch. 10'

I think it's time to pack up the 10 chapters and get this story sold. Great work!

I am thoroughly enjoying your story. Hope you continue it. Your characters are well developed and the sex is GOOD!

"Superb" says it all.

The 'pleasant experience' of reading your super story continues with Ch.10. Well done! You have answered some of the questions posed in my comments to Ch.9 but some remain unanswered. I can't see you ending your story for a few more chapters since we still need to know the fate of Josh’s wife Heather, the other ‘loving wives’ in the group and their crooked lawyer. Josh, in particular, has certainly earned 'satisfaction'. Alex still has some love for the twins despite not being their biological father so what about their real father? Alex is entitled to revenge of some sort! You can get in a couple more chapters by Xmas so keep them cumming!

Very enjoyable story and so well written. I hope you will take this story a little further as has been previously been suggested. Please keep writing in this Literotica forum as it is so well done.

If you ever publish some of you stories please e-mail me, as I would be one who would buy your novels.

Landrious:

You've written what has to be a classic erotic story. You've touched on almost every emotion the human mind is capable of experiencing and you've done it in an outstanding manner. Looking forward to the rest of the story. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I wish i could find a woman like Beth .

pat.

Atlanta,Ga.

Landrious1 i never get tired reading this story you have out done your self and I hope you bring more great stories this way.

Atlanta,Ga

Pat M.

He's kinda spineless don't ya think?

like the story and found it hilarious at the part where a restraining order was placed against Beth (I know it was meant to be Lisa and is a mistake but thought it was hilarious that he just proposed to Beth and is already filing a restraining order on her using her brother lmao)

I agree that the mention of the restraining order against BETH is funny. What was with that slap? Beth has serious anger issues to suddenly lash out like that. She should have lovingly spoken to Alex, not slapped him.