All Comments on 'The Last 24 Hours Ch. 12'

I still am enjoying your story very much.

Boyd

As an early reader I can only say I like this story a lot, and want more!

John

One of the best stories I have read ANYWHERE!

Please keep up the good work.

This just keeps getting better and better. You should consider writing mystries or detective stories. You also appear to have been in the business or know someone who is.

JimDinMN

The best chapter yet.

You've got my attention as I eagerly wait for the next chapter. Thank You. Ronnie W.

This has to be one of the BEST series on Literotica. Your talent is evident. Can't wait for Ch. 13!!!

Certainly a worthy follow up to the previous 11 chapters. This has to be one of the BEST series ever on Literotica and I am looking forward to the next chapter at your earliest. Best wishes, Pete.

While the plot is good overall, the b&d crap in the last two chapters really soured the mood for me.

You really know how to throw a Party Landrious please keep up the great work.

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga.

Can't stop reading this series...one after the other when I can!

exciting. don't quite understand the murder attempts as it seemed the DA had all the info needed even without Lisa's help. Now if all 3 go into hiding how is Alex's help with the fitness club tomorrow morning going to work out

At last another more interesting chapter. The story was getting lost in the sex.