All Comments on 'The Last Bridge in Pittsburgh Ch. 04'

Super story!

I like when the sentences that are given are in italic, so we understand what is inside the MC trigger.

Also, even if now the world is full of possibility for the hero, he's going by small steps, without having a total power over the world. He needs to learn the best way to operate, what he really wants. And there are not too much of girls, just couple of them.

Not a big deal but remember the difference between lose and loose ;) (loose track)