by Dai_Stiho
I also missed this story. I remember reading it long ago and love it; except for the weird body-modifications and the weirder sex that happened in Chapter 7 where I lost interest because of it. Now my interest is restored, because I can see the potential of the story in this chapter, finally moving forward, and also a detailed glimpse of what The Guardian and The Caretaker can do for the Library and how they can still work as a team, even though they're not in the same place.
They were some typos here and there, and a couple of missing words too, but nothing too distracting. Good work. I hope you don't give up in this story. It's different, clever, and definitely interesting.
Take care.
Fascinating universe and characters. I was excited to see you released this chapter, and am definitely interested in seeing more.
Oh man... it's been about a year and a half since the last update, I've really enjoyed this story but I keep getting into these great stories here on Lit that just end up getting abandoned. I truly hope that this is not the case here as I'd be sorely disappointed. Hopefully Dai Stiho just has a bit of life in the way and will return soon.