All Comments on 'The last Moll'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

This short story is so well-written. I love the setting, the characters, the language and the wistful air of it. The only downside, for me, is " It wasn't freak show huge but a solid seven and a half inches and thick as my wrist." Did Millie have a tape measure handy?

Maybe just me, but I hate the mention of breasts in cup sizes and penises in inches. It's never necessary except for porn-type stroke stories, which I don't feel this is. I had to take off a star for that, but otherwise, very nicely done.

firemanlitfiremanlitover 4 years ago

That is 2 stories. I liked both of them, short, to the point. And both were belivable.

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Amateur author - penned 2 historical novels that no one would publish but had a few short stories published in magazines and online. Wrote a few erotic short stories for fun but never found an outlet for them until now.