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All Comments on 'The Last Night of Spring Break'

by Skarlotte

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Jonny_BluelineJonny_Bluelineover 10 years ago
A Great One Pager

It's a good start to your erotic writing on this site. You have enough detail to carry the sex, and convey her emotion and want at the same time.

I look forward to your next effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very realistic story

Captured the excitement and feelings of a fun fling. Having the right attitude and timing can make one night stand a very nice adventure.

VoxMysticaVoxMysticaover 10 years ago
Miscategorised

This really belongs in Erotic Couplings, not romance. If the couple don't even know each other's names...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Don't know each others names, its a hook up, not romance 1*

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