All Comments on 'The Last Road Trip'

Hope theres more to this story

yes to those that enquired this is only the first chapter in a much longer story. It was written to comply with a competition guidelines on length there will be many more chapters soon as i knuckle down and write them.

Your first story is excellent. I enjoyed it very much. :P It's steamin hot, very interesting and I cant wait to read more of Rage's experiences as he continues his travels. More, more :)

very nice work - really enjoyed it

DM

gr8 read mate you did well for your first story look fwd to reading more

Hopefully there is more to this story! Darcy should reappear.

It would be cool if one of Darcy’s local friends was his daughter.