All Comments on 'The Last Word'

too long and not enoungh sex what there was of it ,took two chapters to get to it.

i dont know wat the previous person is talkin about... this story is beautiful with the rite ammout of sex and storyline to keep tha reader interested i loved it

A good story, however could you please pay attention to the spell/grammar checker. You used mine insttead of mind!

Wonderful example of lesbian erotica...realistic dialogue, compelling characters, enticing plot building up to explosive conclusion. A triumph!

All of your stories are excellent. Thank you! There were only a few spelling mistakes, but we all knew what you were getting at!

loved it, you kept everything in sync from beginning to end. Loved it.

Love in a bookstore; what's not to like?

The words are OK a little lol

The word you are looking for is LOSE not Loose which is the opposite of Tight

Another word is BY not buy This is a preposition BY not Buy which the opposite of Pay

There was another word but I forgot what it was lol you used it twice in the beginning