All Comments on 'The Law of Glork Pt. 04'

Love this story!

Thanks for the chapter, can’t wait for the next one

This was another great chapter. All the females Vagonals are interesting. I am very interested in Jacks development.

Worth the wait, really. Thank you.

Love your imagination!

You have created a wonderful and weird world. Awesome.

The Vagonal probably became inter-stellar using the money they saved not having to buy gold & diamond rings. I had to laugh: there are bars & gin joints here on earth where you'll hear sailors say "she smells married" (^: ! I see your writing skills keep coming through. It's a pleasure reading you.

I've been thinking about the Glork making the Life-or-Death decision on all the inhabitants. I'm way curious on what the "judgmental" decision is based on. Our earthly animal kingdom makes it's life-or-death decisions ~ using the Glork method ~ at the baby's birth.

For me, there's no rush for a deadline to get out your next chapter. You're writing well; of course. Thanks

This is a really great story. So glad I found it. Looking forward to the next chapter, it seems Jack did more to Mary than simple bullying.

Where is the next part?

Fuuuuck this is why i avoid new stories... I need more chapters!!!

I am disturbed that a creature who can supposedly judge good and evil would favor a man who once drove a girl to suicide. If that is not evil, what is?

Getting bossed around by his 4.5 foot submissive wife. Sigh. It's a tough situation to have 3 forced marriages (to aliens!) but he's being too reluctant, pushing right up against the deadlines. Having one unloving wife is hell enough, I can't even imagine 3. He should be having nightmares about that rather than the snake lol. Too bad he can't have mistresses rather than wives. Pros and cons I guess.