All Comments on 'The Law of Malthus'

There are some rudamentary mistakes, but the story has me drawn in. There needs to be more parts to this. The characters are just developed enough now to make me want to see more and to feel for them.

Keep up the good work.

Please continue. I am hooked on this story!!

I just looove the ending, " Well, okay!". Oh, please write more!

Thats it? So help me if you dont continue this, I'll continue it for you.......jk well not really but I love the idea of this story. Although I'd tweek it just a bit and keep it going ^_^

so help me if this is all your writing i will climb through this screen and cry and beg at your feet like a little girl and that would not be a pretty sight so please please please weite more this couple need an actual ending nd the shifter needs him someone to

Others are liking this, but I have to say . . . it isn't working - not as erotica, not as sci-fi, not as short story.

I wish this had been continued and we'd seen how he was able to escape the crime boss who would be after him. What happened with him and Kane and what does he do for a job from then on out?

I like this and wish it continued