All Comments on 'The Legend of Bo Keap'

There almost needs to be a second chapter to this story. But it is a well written and well thought out tale

Wildbill, I wouldn't disagree that the lives of Bo and Lou and the others could be followed. No doubt the love would have grown and other adventures would be had. I'll let your suggestion percolate for awhile and see where Bo might take me next. Thanks for the suggestion – yukon

This has been a great story. Would like to see more along the same venue,perhaps as BO>S family grows there could be a next story to tell.

What happened to Tavasi?

This is right up there with all the great stories, love it. Thanks for writing it.

Someone below asked what happened to Tavasi; On page 5 he and Bo talk about this and Tavasi told Bo he is torn but, he is staying with his people. I had in mind to have him and his wife to go with Bo, but it didn't seem like what Tavasi would do if this story was all real and true to life.

This is another great and lovely story that has kept my attention from the first to the very last word. I love the way you paint a world of natives, outlaws, saloon girls, and dandies that blend and mix in a beautifully described setting. We can't have enough 'Feel Good' at the moment, so please, keep them coming!

This is a great story. I always enjoy a vivid, authentic setting, filled with accurate (or plausible!) details. The historic details add to the experience for me.

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

What a remarkable and wonderful story, fiction at its best, my love of the west along with your historical attention, and just enough erotic detail to make a great read. Hats off to you and my appreciation for a job well done. I will be looking forward to more old west material from you!

Enjoyed the story but I feel that it ended rather suddenly. Much more could have been made of the downfall of the baddies and Bo and Lou’s life after.