All Comments on 'The Legend of the Bleeding Heart'

by RiverMaya

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Picture of the bleeding heart pigeon

Hope you won't mind but this might help visually:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Luzon_bleeding-heart

Nice story.

RiverMayaRiverMayaalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Link

Dear Anonymous,

Thank you, but the link doesn't work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Marvellous

A wonderful, dark fable - really enjoyed.

JayDiverJayDiveralmost 4 years ago

EXAMPLE

a perfect example of what the non-erotic categories is for, and a beautiful story. Sounds like what an ancient folktale would be. Thanks.

RiverMayaRiverMayaalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Link to image

I hope this link leads you to an image of the Luzon Bleeding Heart, since anonymous, didn't work, still thanks. Highlight and right click.

https://www.amusingplanet.com/2015/08/luzon-bleeding-heart-dove-that-looks.html

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
The Wiki link

the space between blee ding is prohibiting the Wikipedia link to work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Thank you

This was a beautiful story. I thank you kindly for sharing it.

RiverMayaRiverMayaalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Picture

Dear Anonymous,

Thank you again.

One last time. Highlight and right click.

https://images.app.goo.gl/S4avuskJB9vSsJbA7

Bebop3Bebop3almost 4 years ago

That was a beautiful and well told story. Thanks for sharing it.

Ma8grets3weaknessesMa8grets3weaknessesalmost 3 years ago

A superb folk tale. In my opinion, it should have been submitted, along with some of your other contributions, to a major publishing house as part of a collection of short stories. You deserve a larger audience in recognition of your writing skills.

chytownchytown11 months ago

*****You write some pretty stories. Thanks for sharing.

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July 15, 2023 My poem is in the latest issue of Spirit Fire Review: https://www.spiritfirereview.com/post/new-issue-of-spirit-fire-review-1