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All Comments on 'The Legend of the Waterfalls Pt. 02'

by RiverMaya

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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 3 years ago

After the romantic build-up, a dramatic development ending with a literal cliffhanger. Reminded me of a long time ago reading legends, fables and folk's tales from very different places of the world.

Thanks for sharing

chastenchastenalmost 3 years ago

A lovely continuation of the legend. Wonderful!

OneAuthorOneAuthoralmost 3 years ago

Wonderfully written. Thank you for continuing this story.

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 3 years ago

Excellent story: romance, loyalty,courage, and sibling rivalry!

And now we need to see the next chapter as soon as possible....

norafaresnorafaresalmost 3 years ago

Beautiful writing. Can't wait for the next part!

PeytonMirabellePeytonMirabellealmost 3 years ago

Very lyrical and enchanting!

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July 15, 2023 My poem is in the latest issue of Spirit Fire Review: https://www.spiritfirereview.com/post/new-issue-of-spirit-fire-review-1