All Comments on 'The Lesser Portal'

A very charming piece! Thank you.

I dare say you hit the mark. Possibly the most enjoyable effort I have perused here in ages. Well done, and please, do continue.

A delightful tale, told with gusto. We are amused!

Thank you Tyrnavos! The best story I have read on Lit. A fun tale of erotica. A sequel please!

Wonderful - more of these Liaisons Dangereuse please!

What a charming story! I want to be one of the Courtenay sisters; could there be a fourth sister?

wow! the hottest story I've read in a long time. please, more!

I would love to find them all enjoying the garden at some point.

YOU WRITE WELL. IT IS A GRWEAT STORY TOLD WELL

Very clever. Somewhat reminiscent of the writings of Sally Hollister. As in her stories this one's prose is a lesson in archaic vocabulary.

Enjoyed the strained Victorian setting and even more the plain acceptance of anal fucking as an alternative to the "regular" method. Thank you for sharing.

Odd premise.

The 'language' sort of overwhelmed the stiry and the sex.

Three stars.

Interestng premise.

Then, meh.

Two stars.

Splendid

I scarce know which college tie this Jaspers wears but surely he's a St Johns man? Lovely, evocative prose, a delight.

great. the "proper" dialogue and "respectable" actions of refined women. LOL