All Comments on 'The Lesson Ch. 02: Dinner'

by kiradarkwinter

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z724z724almost 9 years ago
Awesome Story!

I'm loving this so far. It seems well written (I'm no expert on that) and I really like the characters. I hope you keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Tomorrow?

Nobody knows how it turned out because no one stuck around. They all could wait to get away from there. Just plain uninteresting and dull.

XoXmonicaXoXXoXmonicaXoXalmost 9 years ago
More please!

-Kira

This is a really great read. Thanks for bringing us along and please write more.

I, for one, can't wait to see what tomorrow holds for little dove...m

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Sexy as fuck.

Just so you know, I came to this story.... Therefore it is absolutely not boring. Please write more. ;) this is good BDSM- always pushing limits but never becoming gross in the process.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
confused..

I thought that this was set in the distant past. As the slave was taking from a tribe of Celts that were invaded but an Arab tribe or that she was traded between many on the spice route. But instead he has a key fob...really? So during modern times these Arab peoples have never seen a far skin light haired person? This was really good and now the belief or suspension of belief is not there.

PolyVoyeurPolyVoyeurover 8 years ago
Love this story - please continue

Love how tender and romantic the story is. Please continue

Horseman68Horseman68almost 8 years ago
Tomorrow? Yes, Most Definitely.

Please continue this delightful story for your readers. Enjoy your craft.

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