All Comments on 'The life of Ted Pine Ch. 03'

I like the story a lot but the last page is a bit hard to imagine. Is there another chapter or is this it? AAA+++

Can’t wait for more!!!

An amusingly cute story that is very far fetched.

Hope there is more!

Great series I hope there is more to follow very soon.

No denying this is a great series. I do have problems getting my arms around the relationship between Ted, Izzy, and their mom. How did he not see them for years yet they met up at the same airport for the flight to Nashville? Is the mom the grandpa's daughter (I think so, but not 100% sure)? How did grandpa sire the kids while the mom was married? Did the "dad" find out and that led to abuse? Who are the other children the grandpa mentioned? Maybe I missed something in the relatively complex narrative, but seems like a lot of unknowns for an otherwise well written tale. 5*

I could be picky about Sir Theodore Pine, The ranks are of Field marshal, the medals BUT the wife would KILL ME. Great series well told and I'm like a kid in a candy store I want more so I'll just say thank you.

please write more chapters of this beautiful story

Awe come on there's got to be more. Don't leave us hanging. :-(

The story is well thought out and the characters are great. But need to give us more of the story.

I am hooked , so please continue.

Until the military ranks were just thrown in the story was great but nobody would buy a guy that looks barely out of college being a 3 star or anything above a captain.

please continue. I really like this story.

I’ll add my voice to the ithers here - the story is becoming riveting, so please continue it.

Hooked man. What a fine write. Please continue.

Where's the rest of this series?

Should be at least another two Parts by now!

Is this going to be finished

Please don't leave us hanging more please.

Hope you will finish this story!

a very strong 5. Would love to see more of this story.

Please write more

Still waiting for Ch. 04