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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
For....

Your first story is excellent, well written and enthralling. 5*

Nejat_SariNejat_Sariabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you Anonymous

Yours is my first ever comment, thank you for making it a nice one! :)

mochavoymochavoyover 3 years ago

I loved this story! Definitely has an old school, almost mythological style to it! I hope you really do plan to add more stories set in this world.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story but needs a better ending.

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Once upon a time I wanted to be a storyteller, but then I listened to my parents and went to uni and got a real job. Don't repeat my mistakes. Here I'll be posting short stories I write from time to time set in the world of the novel I'm working on.

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