All Comments on 'The Link Pt. 03: The Huntress'

A fitting end to the trilogy. Well done.

It has all been said. Amazing!

So. Fucking. Good! Thank you. Now I have to go read everything Dream Cloud has written.

Probably the best fucking story I have ever read.

wow! congratulations on an epic story! Very well executed in every way. You are one hell of an author. 10 stars if they had them.

Shades of Stranger in a Strange Land by Robert Heinlein. Possibly just as good as that masterpiece from the master.

Fantastic! Thank you for posting this

Again, just like the other two, this should be on the shelves in a store, a little confusing mind you but it may be because of all the political talk. Nevertheless I loved it. The Link has become one of my favorite series on this website

WOW. I just wasted an entire workday reading this. Whenever I told myself I had to finish something, I just kept reading. Thank you very much!

What a story thank you

Absolutely amazing! Please never stop writing. I’ve read at least half of your stories on here now and they are fantastic.

A very interesting read. If only it were true and peace and goodwill could be spread all over earth. Loved the story. Sorry for a few discordant notes. At one stage Jack had been mixed up with a Jerry. And I don't think a baby could stink like that, especially if she is angelic. Stink comes from the nonsense that we adults consume. A baby's diet consists only of milk and milk based products. These does not leave such a stink. Believe me, I know. I have 4 children and I have helped in changing their diapers when they were babies.

Loved how you wrapped this up. A Stinking baby is an Angel.

lovely story. please keep writing.

How in the world can there be such negative reviews? Yes, there are small issues here and there, but this story has more heart than 99% of everything on this site. Bravo, I'm impressed.

Great story overall. If I have one nitpick, it's that the real nature of Mr. Sabbatini needed to be foreshadowed a little more. Maybe I just missed stuff but that thing with him, to me, came completely out of left field, enough to feel like an ass-pull. A few more hints dropped throughout the story in a clever way where you go "OH! That explains it!" at the reveal would have made the climax significantly better. But, I enjoyed all 3 parts very much.

Worst series I have read on Literotica!!!!!! Your direction was so fickle and weird and totally off the rails that nothing was enjoyable about this story. Nothing consistent and this whole last section was so inconsistent it would make you wonder why you started the writing in the first place if this was where you going to end up. Wow just stupid. -1,000,000,000 *s

Not the first time I have read this but just as enjoyable. A great tale.

Yea win some. Lose some.. some don't like. Others do.. I'm with the others myself... Let all these folks that want to dissect someone's story here.. Write their own!!! I mean they Must be experienced editors, and writers theirselfs; for all the judging they do with ppls stories... SO why don't you hush; and write your own!?? Stop criticsing others work; and write your Own.. afraid someone else.. Like you will judge your writing?.. I thank the folks that write here myself.. they have a talent I don't the way to tell a story.. so thks.. and have a great day.. even you critics... 👍🤷😉😁

Interesting. She could well meet the description in the Revelation of the antichrist.

Just a rewrite of Breaking Dawn, the Volturi and the Cullens

All the bullshit with Sabbatini was so fucked in the head!! Crap writing

Anthony the savage deserved a death worse than a dog

Was dumb bitch Teegan in love with Jason suddenly!!

This story became more pathetic as it went along!!

By now I cannot remember how many times I have read this! An all:time favorite!

What a wild ride! The possibilities seem so much easier than Aladdin's Lamp. If only the current global crises could be also solved, like climate change and the divide and diaspora of the tower of Babel.

One of the best I’be read on this site. I couldn’t stop turning the pages, anxious to see what was coming.

Absolutely, unequivocally the best series I've ever read on the site. Thank you for that! There were some inconsistencies in the "power" of Teegan and Caleb's bond and and the resulting power implications, but everything else was spot on. The climax to the story was incredible as was the unique way you handled the epilogue. 5+*

Second reading. Even more beautiful this time around.

I agree with myinpatation, movie material. Great story one of the best on this site. Thanks

Problems are so much easier to deal with when there are two ✌

Second time I've read this. This could be an outstanding movie. Though I suspect too many religious nuts would scream sacrilege. 10/10

Thank you for your time 🥰😊💐✍️

If you don’t mind, more please ☮️😋

I absolutely LOVED this series! I'm sad it's over but it was a great ending

Well, DreamCloud, you aren't Ted Sturgeon, because he is dead. And you aren't Spider Robinson, because you have a different prose style. But other than these minor points, you might well be either of them. And that's about the highest praise I can give.

Thank you for everything.

Great story ! loved the premise and it was well written. Of all the stories I have read on this site over the last 7 years or so this the first I have commented on.

Great story doesn’t express very well just how good this story was.

I don't know how to express just how good this story is, I have been reading all of DreamClouds stories, and they seems to just get better and better.

Wow.

My only complaint is I can't give it 6 stars!

What an epic read! Well worth the time it took for all 3 long chapters. 5* don't feel enough to express my gratitude.

Incredibly good read.

There are many great stories on literotica but this series has become my favorite by far.

When I think of my wife, I picture the young beauty who walked into my store in April 79. That's who I see today- Don't confuse a man with a bunch of facts. My story, I'm sticking with it, good job Dreamcloud...5 stars

Anon56

This is beyond excellent. This applies to each part and to the whole story. A couple of questions? Is Teegan's daughter also an angel? Is her husband an angel by association?

10*

BJ

Brilliant this should be a film Action, Love, Horror and Sex, magical story strong growing plot it just needs a screenwriter,

Wonderful story with romance, intrigue, action, and fantasy. Your style is reminiscent of Clancy with a twist in fantasy.

I was especially impressed with your lack of the gross details in the intimate scenes. This was a story with a little intimacy not a sex story. You have my respect and admiration for that.

I truly enjoyed it and wish read more of your work in the future

I'm sad I've reached the end of this story, but it was such a joy to read. Reading the first part high on lsd + weed was interesting to say the least (you can probably go back and find my comment lol), and although I didn't read the 2nd and 3rd part while high on drugs, I enjoyed them just as much.

I'm sorry to read that someone stole your works for their own greedy profit. It's a shame that it indirectly killed your passion to share you stories here, but I can somewhat understand. I hope one day you reconsider and make a comeback! If not, the works you've left up here will be cherished - there's no doubt about that

It’s strange to find such a beautiful, non-erotic story here. I encourage you to keep writing this type of story. Have you written any published novels yet? Just keep doing what you do. This is the first time I was moved to happy tears reading a story at this site. Thank you.

THE LINK IS SOMETHING THAT NEEDS TO CONTINUE TO BE FOLLOWED. JUST THINKING OF A WORLD IN PEACEFUL ACCORD REALLY SHOULD BE CONTINUED AND ENJOYED!!!

Amazing

You never shared why Sam had such a strong bond with Teagan, and baby Rose.

I saw in your bio that you had some works stolen and posted to Amazon, and I’m very sorry to hear it. If that act has cost us the opportunity to read even one story from you, then I curse the thief, for he has stolen from us all! If you’re still writing, I would really appreciate it if you would put a link or some way to find your content, because you are a wonderful storyteller!

You made my tears flowing freely down my cheeks ...... Unbelievable wonderful ....... Unfortunately the so called evil being will never e ereased by humans , because we are evil and sinners ...... We would need Teegans and her family construction or her kiddys, this would be the only future before we destroy this blue planet ...... The fight with the devil was coming down to an perfect dramatic extraordinary simple task - love, love filtered into one big source a fabulous idea ...... And so i would loveto read neas about north/south corea or isreal &palastina and some more ...... Yes turning soldiers into a real helping force would solve the real problems with apocalyptic dimensions starting right now on earth

This thre parts was one of the best i ever read here, more loke a romance and an advertisement for love family kiddys ah music

So ten stars are not enough hearts may help further

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wow. thank you for sharing your work with us, you have transcribed a dream. truly a story, and we can all hope the dream grows.

@DreamCloud, I love you. Will you Marry me?

An excellent story, if it were only possible to settle all our petty differences. It will never be possible as long as there is the mindset that says "My god is better than your god". or one religion looking down on another. The old altruistic phrase "Live and let live" is not possible in the world as we know it as long as there are people who believe the only 'right' way to live is their way. We can only hope there is an angel out there....................

I enjoyed this story a lot, thanks for sharing it. I would like to criticize the "final" villain however. His attempt to corrupt the links came out of nowhere and the how and why for such an ability was completely unexplained. The assassination attempts also don't seem to fit into this plan at all. Since the antagonists did not play a big role anyway its not a big issue but it really left me confused and seems like it was ham fisted last second.

Second time reading this, second time blown away. Who is DreamCloud? His talent is amazing. Only matched on Lit by AspenEssling ( those two getting together would be like Lennon/ Mcartney). A wonderful story, thanks again for sharing. This time it helped pass time while I was sick with Covid.

Overall the storey is definitely worth 5 stars, but I only rated this last chapter ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Because of the abrupt ending.

Brilliant, great character builds, awesome original story , honesty I’m a bit humbled by your talent been a long time since I cried reading a book but you made it that real and I just want to say thank you and amazing.

Wow just wow. Absolutely loved it. Well written and well thought out plot with loveable characters. Now I am off to read some of your other works.

At the risk of sounding like a broken record, I truly wish there were more stars to award DreamCloud for this one! She not only tells such detailed and thought-provoking stories, but her innate desire to illuminate the good side of people is a gift that we should pay attention to. She wants this world to be a better place with people living in harmony despite our differences. I can't agree more.

Overall great. Just a little disappointed with the ending. I. Would love to know more about Teegan, Caleb and the rest.

I hope that somewhere, somehow, you will know how much I loved reading this. I'd say this is the best story on this site...

...but then, I know your other work.

Kept coming up and I avoided it numerous times, then I saved it to read later after seeing it was one of your works. My God was a wonderful distraction from this thing we call life.

If some afternoon, one or more of these characters should stop by and prop a hip on the corner of your desk for a bit, there are many of us who would love to review any of your subsequent journal entries.

OMG. Absolutely the best read. Good luck on future work.

A second read, still one the best stories on site. Thank you for your efforts, and hard work, I look forward to more from you.

Sorry the system will not let me give more stars, Thanks again, hoping your world is good.

North Pacific

Took 3 days to finish but it was worth it.

Amazing!

Best story I've read for quite some time. Pure excellence!

Wonderful story!!

very good. I like positive endings. good plot

I really enjoyed this story. Can't believe someone could sell plagiarized stories on Amazon. Is there no way to correct or compensate? Can't Amazon prevent this by examining what's offered for sale before it goes public? Can someone plagiarize & sell commercially published works? Do we have to lose all the good authors?

Stories foretold and then told well

Undeniable love overcoming hatred’s hell

Cheeks stained with teary tracks

Hearts overwhelmed overflowing simple facts

Poets and musicians

Spending time with politicians

I can’t imagine a finer story

Too you sweet author, please accept well all the glory

The military wouldn’t need the phones, they would track the airplane. It’s in part why executives ride other companies airplanes, it hides merger targets ( strangely as companies are required to do by law. ), simple courtesies of offering a ride saving flight time as well.

The military knowing Teegans location and a orbits involvement would also have noticed frequent trips of his plane to old town Maine

But tidbits aside a very enjoyable story

Somebody should film this... maybe steven spielberg??

5 stars, a little more development of how Caleb was so in line with Teegan would have been nice

this is the bad part, of this story, THE END

is wish i could unread THE LINK so i good read it again for the first time

now i can only reread it ....

thank you for sharing

this is defenitly the best story on LIT.....

I really enjoyed this story thank you it was a great read. Sorry it ended

That was not only the best thing I’ve read on this site, it was flat out one of the best books I’ve read this year. This should be in print.

Not sure whether this is my fourth or fifth time reading this story. It is the writing and a story that I never tire of reading.

Holy shit, this is an epic. Excellence.

I was hooked from the beginning, and am so glad I stayed to the end!

Very well done.

GREAT

Very well done. I couldn't put it down

One of the best books I’ve ever read, of any type or genre.

OutSTANDing!

This is the second time I've read the story and it is as gripping as the first time. Outstanding.

amazing, better than anything i would actually go out to buy, massive props

Another amazing chapter, again would give it 10 stars if I could, thank for the writing, the characters, the story, this and part's 1 and 2 are the best thing I've read in 20 years bar none. I only hope that you have been discovered and are writing for a living because you were born to write and to inspire great feelings in people.

I don’t think you truly understand what a true gift you possess or maybe you do because you wrote about someone who possesses a great gift as well. I have stopped reading stories before getting through the first page because of grammatical errors. Your story (all 3 parts) were chock full of them yet I didn’t care because the writing was that damn good! I can with all sincerity, joy, love and honesty tell you that you are one of the best writers I’ve ever come across in my life. This encompasses EVERYTHING I’ve ever read! You are now in my top 5 favorite authors. Edgar Allen Poe is my favorite and number 1 on that list. I have never read a piece of literature that has evoked so many emotions in me and made me feel such a profound sense of joy, wonder and gratefulness in having been blessed with reading it. Again, I thank you for sharing your blessed gift with us undeserving wretches and beg of you to publish your work. This book alone would become a best seller that would soon become a book that breaks the world’s record for being on The New York Times bestseller’s list the longest and would also win the Pulitzer Prize, The John Newbery Medal, Edgar Awards and the National Book Critics Circle Award. You are a magical weaver of words and I pray with all my heart that the world will one day witness it as well. Thank you!

he writes in wattpad.com named mike potter

For once I may be truly envious of a fictional character. I would give anything to feel what they have with their spouse. I love my wife and I know she loves me, but this is so very different. You’ve created something genuinely beautiful in this story and did it in a manner that wasn’t corny or contrived and did not portray the main characters as Mary Sues.

Phenomenal story overall, really good sci-fi focused on individual relationships. Thanks for writing this.

3 AM, second day... a wonderful story even the 2nd time around. Those who stole your work have cheated us all.

Amazing. Surprisingly, I haven't really though about World Peace a lot. World Peace is really quite a lovely thing. Such a powerful concept to bring together nations. And Is real/Palestine, N/S Korea is still very relevant today.

Very powerful theme of using anger and hatred as a crutch, Teena is finally able to unlock and embrace the full transformative effect of love.

I read this in 2 days and 1 night. All three parts. That's how much I loved it. Sam and Teegan's connection was how I fell in love with the story. But all the characters were all fantastically written. Fell in love with nana Rose too. Reminded me of my own nana.

WOW! What a wonderful and beautiful story. The first of this Authors stories I have read and now I'm hooked. Last activity was 4 years ago. I'd love to see him come back to submit more. Thank you DreamCloud, thank you!

This is the most powerful piece of literature I've ever had the pleasure and honor to read on this site. I hope you continue writing wherever you are.

Outstanding!!!!

Great epic story, nice and full of hope. “So live that people can see that love is the best answer to the world.”