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NKKMDNKKMD6 months ago

Very good. 5*

AnotherChapterAnotherChapter6 months ago

Interesting and thought provoking. What do I need on the list someone might give me? I might be loath to see it!

5*

JJ1961JJ19616 months ago

Like a christmas carol. Well done!

shelleycat1shelleycat16 months ago

Thank you. Interesting and something very different. 5*, and it made me go back to the list to see what was missing.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I liked it. 5 stars.

mainer42mainer426 months ago

fabulous tale and very well written sir

memorable_eventmemorable_event6 months ago

A very touching story and appropriate, I believe for the winter holiday contest. Well written.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy6 months ago

Excellent story!

5

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Deeply touching story of a troubled young man's growth.

StrappySandalsStrappySandals6 months ago

Nice story!! It's not usually that easy to rectify life's human trauma, but opening heart and soul and making the first step is always a good start!! I'll go 5- stars for that life message!!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Liked it, but felt it could have been fleshed out a bit.

bobbycull55bobbycull556 months ago

V eery well written. Enjoyed the scenes. What happened on his date with Julie?

Paul_ChancePaul_Chance6 months ago

That is an excellent little story, well-written and well-delivered.

Flar1958Flar19586 months ago

A little bit emotionally ? But very good. Thanks for your story

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Nice story.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

It was moving, maybe a little to close to home for me. Several of the 12 steps are right out of the pages of my life. Fantastic job.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Beautiful and emotional. Loved it.

chytownchytown4 months ago

*****Good read. Thanks for sharing.

rbloch66rbloch663 months ago

A little predictable, but a wonderful story all the same.

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