All Comments on 'The Little Leather Thong'

by MVP6

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yowseryowserover 2 years ago

Too thong for words

Something different, at the limits. A fine line between over-the-top and just right, but your imagination has exceeded your grasp. Some nice descriptions (and quickly to the action) but one more 'amazing' and the thing will implode. Huge cock? Of course. A little more restraint and you've got yourself a splendid story.

Keep writing.

MVP6MVP6over 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the comment. I really appreciate the feedback.

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