All Comments on 'The Live-in Ch. 01'

DEFINETLY DON'T MAKE THIS STORY ENTIRELY "LEZ" ORIENTED..FOR WOMEN/MOMS LIKE MYSELF...BI MALE SEX CHARGED ACTION.. ESPECIALLY BETWEEN DADS &SONS IS THE BIGGEST TURN-ON.. ENOUGH SAID..

Brilliant - next chapter please !

such a loving icestual family just give use more NOW ty yours leann ...PS hot sexy mmmm .mawh xx

when will people realize a lot of us do not like the gay stuff or the pregnant stuff

... but would be much better without any gay stuff

Great story, please write more!

Great setup and story. Please hurry up and write more....don't leave out the father / son stuff......it adds to the sexiness.

Anyone complaining about the father-son stuff has no right to. You were warned at the start.

You must not have such bad end what was that with father and son. You have to becareful next time

Yes, we were warned about the father-son scenes from the start & as long as those scenes remain minimal in appearence & do not take over the story; I look forward to subsequent chapters!

I enjoyed this story greatly, especially since it's from the perspective of an outsider watching. The male scenes were quite hot! It didn't detract from the story as a whole, but I think rather added to it. I hope you continue and I look forward to your subsequent chapters! Will Ana give in and allow herself to be a submissive? Oh, the possibilities!

Not only well written, but with a different angle than we're used to seeing. Love that you included the bisexual relationship. At the part about both guys being submissive I thought that it would be strange if they weren't also bi.

I'm not into BDSM myself, but so far it's been mild enough to not bother me. Should it get more advanced I can always skip those parts. A fact that some anons seem to overlook. :)

Cannot wait for more. Definitly keep all of the bisexual stuff both malle and female. It helped to make this story as awesome as it is.

A real hot story. The gay sex, while not my thing, lets us know that this family is up for anything. With them the expression "anything is possible" has a whole new meaning.

I wish i had Ana's job hot story i came twice......i enjoyed the father son scenes yum

Great story. Love incest in all it's forms and would love to be in Anna's place. Do you think they would like a butler?

Wow! Fuck! What a fucking hot story! And so well written. Incest is my favourite subject, and this one is right up there at the top of my list. I'd love to hear more of their adventures, and think it about time Anna wore a skirt instead of jeans. If I had been Anna, I would have had a skirt (and no panties) by the third day.! Morepower to your pen, vanpeebles.

great story. the new maid is great. i hope she joins in soon. well written.

I found myself getting irritated that in this house of sex the maid, Ana, wore jeans! Surely such a kinky family would have insisted on.at least a dress and at best a maid's outfit to show off her body and give her (and them) easy access. Small point but nothing less sexy than jeans even tight ones when comes to available, urgent sex.

Liked the story. Did not care for male on male sex but thoroughly enjoyed everything else. I enjoyed the openness of the family. So far the story has been logically developed without anything off the wall.