All Comments on 'The Lockeroom Shower'

Written with style. Believable and wonderfully hot. Please continue with these characters. Superb and truly erotic!

Well written, great story woud like to read more.

The story was great, i loved it..

Only requires a litte tightening up on spelling errors. Almost like a computer program was used to correct something. A 5

I like how this was written, i would be thrilled if you added a sequel. Um thanks ^\\^

This was a very good story, I really enjoyed it. I wish you'd write more.

Please, make it better and longer.

Good story. Very erotic. Too bad there's no more submissions from this author.

This story made me so incredibly wet. Waiting for part 2!!

I love breast stories and this made me horny and wet. Waiting for part 2....z

I want that experience!! And BTW, refreshing to read a well written story without spelling and grammatical errors!

Rejuvenation

A ritual dousing is often taken as a new beginning, a renewal, a revival. That's what a trip to a communal shower does for Sarah and Ann, both married women setting out to sample an encounter together.